Broadjam Artist: Peter G Olach – PGO
Song: HOC (the Full Story)
Reviewer: Simon Finn
Positive Comments: I love the arrangement of this and the fact that you launch straight in with the vocal with no pre-amble. There are some great lyrics here, you have really “delved” into the mood and the moment and tried to paint really vivid pictures for your listeners. There are some great subtle rhymes too that I think work really well.
Constructive Comments: I don’t think I’ve come across such a long song before, and while I’m all for stretching the boundaries of song-writing I’m not sure the world is ready for such a long song. You have great ideas here, but I would suggest an edit and a more consise “story”.