
Broadjam Artist: lost on foot
Song: hard rain
Reviewer: Simon Finn
Positive Comments: I liked this a lot. I love the way you opened with a sparse version of your chorus, and your main hook – very clever. The song has a clear construction and the lyrics follow the structure so that it’s easy to follow. There are some great lines in the lyrics too. The title too is a great construction to use with the hook – not easy to come by these great combinations.
Constructive Comments: This song could get radio play – it’s contemporary, but the arrangement is a bit traditional and the vocals sound a bit over-treated for this genre – it would benefit from sounding a bit more “dirty”….great musicianship though!