Broadjam Artist: Ronald Arduini
Song: DRIFT
Reviewer: Charles Valona
Positive Comments: Reminds me of stuff that Brian Eno did or even maybe the Talking Heads. I like the generous use of the various instruments and the vocal work seems spot on to me.
Constructive Comments: Main main suggestion is try making the lyrics to the song more understandable. The lyrics to a song should be first and foremost and should be easily understood even when someone is listening to the song on a lap. At times I can’t begin to understand what you are saying or singing about.Keep the instrumentation at bay, they should be used to support the lyrics and the song. Overall I was inspired hearing your music and your concepts, nicely done.