in my life now by James Hamilton

Broadjam Artist: James HamiltonSong: in my life nowReviewer: Simon FinnPositive Comments: This is well constructed, musically. The chord progressions and melody are assured and logical and take the listener on a logical journey – there is no “jarring”…

James Hamilton

Broadjam Artist: James Hamilton
Song: in my life now

Reviewer: Simon Finn

Positive Comments: This is well constructed, musically. The chord progressions and melody are assured and logical and take the listener on a logical journey – there is no “jarring”. The structure is impeccable and you clearly have a good grasp of songwriting theory. The whole production is very polished, clean and easy to listen too. I loved the vocal harmonies in the middle 8. In the lyrics there were a few moments that I felt didn’t sit easily – the use of the word “Female” was one, for example. Good work.

Constructive Comments: The lyric hook of “in my life now” is a bit passive, and I would suggest making it a bit more of a call to action.