Broadjam Artist: lost on foot
Song: paint a smile
Reviewer: MGB
Positive Comments: Very pleasant song with a very pleasant beat. It flows very smoothly. Instrumentation and arrangement are great. At the beginning, you think Jimmy Buffet is coming at you, but after listening a couple times, it sounds more like you have a persona all your own. Best of luck.
Constructive Comments: Only thing I could even consider changing here is the line “feeling weak when you want to be strong.” The only reason I say that is because I was guessing along, and I just kind of knew that would be the next line. That is just my test of originality. If I can guess the next line, it needs to be changed. May be a dumb rule, though. Best of luck with this and all of your undertakings.