Broadjam Artist: lost on foot
Song: be my valentine
Reviewer: Kalyx Pistol
Positive Comments: Candle Box is a well known band that comes to mind,maybe a little tonic, This singers tone is listenable,pretty ok. The riffs are cool. i like the overall Melody. The lyrics, in content are not bad, but maybe rephrasing the ideas here would lead to lyrics that could lend to vocalizations with a tighter beat structure/ iambic pentameter.
Constructive Comments: Open up on the chorus make it bigger vocally and musically. tighten up the hook focus on the catch phrase and really sum up what the song is saying. bass! more bottom end. and the over all guitar tome could be warmer/fatter, but is clear and over all listenable. Wet up the vocals a bit just a little or a lot.