Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Breathless / R&B
Reviewer: DNG Music
Positive Comments: Smooth groove, some of the breaks were very creative. Vocal arrangements were interesting. Great use of auxiliary sounds to build the verses i.e. strings. The bridge was really good.
Constructive Comments: The overall sound of the track is dull/muddy. I’d look around 800 hz in your vocal eq to eliminate some of that. The Bass sounds generic or cheap I would fatten up or try a live bass if it’s not live. If you are searching to hit top 40 music with this then the sounds themselves have to become more interesting. Could be a great song with some minor tweaks and some creativity with sound placement.