Broadjam Artist: Chet Nichols
Song: The Night Train (#1 Broadjam: New Age)
Reviewer: Ken Lehnig
Positive Comments: I like the piano riff. Great harmony. Good hook.
Constructive Comments: This is a good tune, I would edit down under 4:00 for any commercial use. I loved the piano and the riff, and I like your voice, however from a production point of view the piano and the vocal compete in the ear. Bringing in a guitar or quiet organ under the vocal would have the lyrics come forward. I’m a little unsure of the chorus. What I think you mean to be the chorus sounds, to me, as if it’s part of the verse and “…coming home” is the chorus because it gets the listeners attention. If that is a bridge try making it the chorus and the other a bridge.