Broadjam Artist: Spider kiting
Song: Who stole the sun
Reviewer: Jeff Maguire
Positive Comments: Help, I’m trapped underneath a very very large rock, I can’t get out,it really sucks , can’t see a thing under this goddamn rock.. . someone please get this rock off of me … I cannot see the son.
Constructive Comments: Honestly, I’m yin/yang on this track. On the one hand it’s really repetitive, on the other hand it’s really repetitive and get’s stuck in your head and won’t go away. Sort of like sever depression or an epileptic fit. So in that sense, I think you nailed what you were after. Not sure how the vocals will work commercially but it does have a kind of Depeche Mode gone bluesy authenticity about it. Maybe in that spirit see if you can add a real repetitive and identifiable synth hook to just ram it into the listeners ear. I don’t think the singer is kidding. Personally I’d like to hear a few more lyrics than the same two or three lines repeated for 4 minutes. But, you never know, you gotta play what you hear.