Broadjam Artist: Douglas Branson aka dB+1
Song: Video Jam
Reviewer: Dave Haddad (CenterPeace)
Positive Comments: The rhythm groove is good. Good keyboard work, I can tell you know what are doing melodically. I think you have the makings of a really nice song.
Constructive Comments: Starts out like a regular song then it kind of gets a bit avant-garde which if it is what you were trying to do then you nailed it. The drums do sort of sound like someone played the sounds on a keyboard and didn’t quite fix the out of time parts. Either way the category is right as experimental. For me it’s not creative enough to be avant-garde. This is not a complete song, it is a groove idea with song jamming over the top. I am sure that you get this, it’s just i apologize but i can’t give this high numbers there is no song structure here it’s only one part. You should at least come up with a B Section… chorus pre, bridge. I know it’ Experimental but you still need more to be taken serious. I think if you develope this idea more and clean up some of the loose groove issue that it could be something really cool.