Broadjam Artist: Yung Proof
Song: Southern California
Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat
Positive Comments: don’t approve the language at all you can say the same thing using better language and have a lot more impact
Constructive Comments: Try a new, more powerful approach What is the sense of using language that is disrespective? What purpose does that serve listeneing to this seemed like a waste of time to me!You want somebody that comes away from your song to be inspired—why would anybody want to hear a song like this?And take it from my Granny, “You catch more flies with honey than you do vinegar”!