Broadjam Artist: HarryBudini
Song: The Skeptical Inquirer
Reviewer: Brenda Craven
Positive Comments: Bouncy little groove. It is reminiscent of something the Beatles would do. I like the concept of the song and believe you have the beginnings of a great piece here. Good transitions and rhythm.
Constructive Comments: There’s a little space at the beginning of the song that you may want to remove. (Unless you placed it there as part of the song.). I really do feel that the vocals could be a little stronger. The tone is perfect for this style of song, but I could not understand any of the lyrics …the message that was being presented through this song. My suggestion would be to record this again and relax when you sing. Make sure you are comfortable with the music, it’s changes and the lyrics…Have fun with it.I would also bring down the volume of your organ a little bit to make sure it doesn’t overpower your vocals. You have a really great start to a song here. It’s a little short, but it is a great song. With some minor adjustments in mix and with vocals, it will be terrific. Keep up the good work.