Broadjam Artist: Mark S. Ludes (MSL)
Song: You Make Everything Alright
Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat
Positive Comments: basically a nice song reminds me of Poco a little when they just started out! Great Subject
Constructive Comments: Well to begin with -you need a break in the song—it gives the listener something fresh—As an exercise–write this song out on paper-then leave a line in between—-write down the words–then on the line underneath –write new words that convey the same meaning. You’ll be surprized what this can do to your songs!Music is Love===============catnip==================