Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: Destiny
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: This is a song about 2 people in a complicated relationship. One of them wants to be free and the other can’t get free. Let’s be just friends apparently isn’t working. Good theme. Best lyric: Music in Poetry…I liked that. Noodling lead guitarist does a nice job with his/her fun-to-listen-to licks.
Constructive Comments: Inject a little more passion into the performance/delivery of the lyrics. Make the drums more interesting. I wasn’t too fond of that last sound in the ending (sounding like the letting out of air?) I also couldn’t understand one lyric, the one one heart______and one free. Keep up the good work.