Ideal World (Ft. CoriAnder & Amy Reader) by David James

David James

Broadjam Artist: David James
Song: Ideal World (Ft. CoriAnder & Amy Reader)

Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Positive Comments: I like the way this song starts off nice and easy before the vocal comes in. The singer has a range that is, for some reason, a little hard for me to decipher. This song could easily be in a soundtrack for the beginning or trailer. Nice use of strings later on in the production.

Constructive Comments: As much as I like this song, I think the artist could make it even better with a break of some kind. I know I might be suggesting the terrible rewrite word (Ugh!) but I think it might be a useful use of time. For this composition, it wouldn’t be that hard. Good luck with your music. This old music teacher thinks that you have it all ahead of you if you just keep pressing on! ================Catnip Pat================

David James

Broadjam Artist: David James
Song: Ideal World (Ft. CoriAnder & Amy Reader)

Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Positive Comments: I like the way this song starts off nice and easy before the vocal comes in. The singer has a range that is, for some reason, a little hard for me to decipher. This song could easily be in a soundtrack for the beginning or trailer. Nice use of strings later on in the production.

Constructive Comments: As much as I like this song, I think the artist could make it even better with a break of some kind. I know I might be suggesting the terrible rewrite word (Ugh!) but I think it might be a useful use of time. For this composition, it wouldn’t be that hard. Good luck with your music. This old music teacher thinks that you have it all ahead of you if you just keep pressing on! ================Catnip Pat================