Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Jeanie
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: There’s always a niche for a love song with a certain girl’s name in it, and this one’s name is Jeannie. A heartfelt plea for understanding how much he loves her, backed by a nice sounding piano.
Constructive Comments: Vocals need work. I could understand all the lyrics, but the tone needs improvement. Replace the drum loop with something more interesting. Work on freshness/originality in your lyric writing.HEY Randal, it’s me, Mrs. Kate, gotcha pegged!