Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Breathless / R&B
Reviewer: Nigel Barrett
Positive Comments: Really liked the walking piano octave notes underneath the tune.
Constructive Comments: The chorus, whilst easily identifiable really lacked impact. I know some tunes work well when the music is the same throughout, but for me it just lacked another dimension. I would add a subtle pad chord underneath the chorus. Maybe drop the walking piano octave notes out during the chorus? Alternatively leave them out of the verse and add them only during the chorus, otherwise for me the chorus lacks something.