Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey, S. & A. Corey
Song: Chain Of Sin Art’s Version
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: Very cool minor mood with a Gothic feel. The vocal delivery is very Leonard Cohen. Very artistic effort here with a lot of good things going on. I think the next version will be killer.
Constructive Comments: The bass needs some taming–it’s too rumbly as is and fights your tune. I’d cut the <100K on it and lower the volume and bring the percussion up. That rough hard left sound is cool but doesn't quite translate--it's too rough. I think the vocal should be a less bass heavy and bring it up just a tad. The lyrics may be a bit too cliche in places. I think overall you could glue the arrangement together better, and maybe review the overall structure of the song composition. This would take a serious look to offer specific suggestions. This is really cool work and it's totally worth the extra work to optimize it!