Broadjam Artist: Dana and Brad
Song: Cover of Glycerine – By Bush
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: The is a passionate song with some very strong lyrics and strong vocal performances. I think an even better song is just around the corner!!
Constructive Comments: I’m gonna poke at this but with the intent of helping. I think the musical bed underneath is way too static–there isn’t enough pulse/beat overall, there’s no bridge section, the chords don’t work with the melody, and it is just basically bland although the sounds nice. The male vocal, for me anyway, has too much hard breathing masquerading as passion. Can you get more conviction without the heavy breaths? (always a taste call as to whether you edit the breath sounds out or not). At around 3:00 the female vocal gets really pitchy. I can’t understand what your lyric hook is even with multiple listens.