
Broadjam Artist: lost on foot
Song: cupid’s arrow
Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth
Positive Comments: good balance and content, good mixgood triple harmony, you have 8 seconds to get the listener hooked—you lose them if they are not riveted by then!
Constructive Comments: I don’t think your lyric is up to the fine musicrememberive never said this in a critique before butI would scrap the words but keep the music go back and make the lyrics more impressive use new wordskeep on truckin! catnip