Broadjam Artist: Elester Steele
Song: WHEN CAN I SEE YOU AGAIN
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: The message of this song is clearly communicated throughout: When Can I See You Again? Smooth relaxing jazz vibe permeates throughout the song. The vocal is on the same even keel throughout the whole track. Nice instrumentation. Heartfelt vocal. Nice job.
Constructive Comments: I would say…work on originality in your lyrics and rhymes. Cry/eye. Hard/start. Heart/start. Work on the ending. It’s abrupt, which gives the song an unfinished sound. Is it a friend or a lover? You said friend, but it sounded like more of a love relationship, which made it a little confusing.