Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey, S. & A. Corey
Song: Once Upon A Cricket
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: This song definitely gets high marks for originality. It’s a kid-focused song from an adult point of view about a little cricket. It’s actually rather funny… “give him a whack.” I can see the kids jumping when you talk about frogs, and landing with a thump. The ending is pretty comical, too.
Constructive Comments: I think for a kids’ song, this might be kind of long. If you want it to be more “kid-friendly”, marketable in that genre, I’d leave out the “O my God” part. FYI, I wrote a kids song with a cricket in it. Here’s the link, in case you want to listen to it: http://www.broadjam.com/artists/songs.php?artistID=24409&mediaID=572522Mrs. Kate