Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: Long Gone
Reviewer: Joshua Rice
Positive Comments: This is a good solid blues number, simple and to the point. It has very nice guitar work and good overall balance, a clean arrangement and a nice hook.
Constructive Comments: The song could use a little “pop”, nothing except the guitar break jumps out. I hear two possible ways to address this: – the guitar tones are a bit muddy. You could clean this up, add some bite.- the vocal phrasing is a little stiff. You could loosen up the phrasing to get some emotional content. I am not feeling the pain.