Raindrops by Marilyn Hall

Broadjam Artist: Marilyn HallSong: RaindropsReviewer: Keith TaylorPositive Comments: Very nice song! Very pretty tune and nice story. I really liked it.Constructive Comments: There is one line “But I remember it today” that seems a little rushed to fi…

Marilyn Hall

Broadjam Artist: Marilyn Hall
Song: Raindrops

Reviewer: Keith Taylor

Positive Comments: Very nice song! Very pretty tune and nice story. I really liked it.

Constructive Comments: There is one line “But I remember it today” that seems a little rushed to fit it in. I think it is just one too many syllables. If you agree you could lose the “But” or change “Remember” to “Recall”. This is a pretty picky comment but this song is so good and that was the only thing that stuck out for me.