Broadjam Artist: Patrick Dude
Song: Leave Me Alone
Reviewer: Calico King
Positive Comments: Props for doing something that no one is really doing. There is definitely nothing in the hip hop or alternative genre that has this sound or feel to it, and I think there is promise in that. Pretty much everything about the tune is unorthodox and unique, from lyrics/hook/instrument/vocals and the genre mix is entirely in its own lane.
Constructive Comments: My biggest hang up with this song on is despite being very unique and perhaps innovative, it is almost too unorthodox. There’s a bit too much going on all fronts, both sonically, lyrically, melodically, and structurally. There are moments where the instrumental is decent as a hip hop/grunge/alt rock mix, but the vocals are often flat and the lyrics are disjointed, it needs focus. The writer needs to strip down all the things going on in this tune, hone in on what is best, and work on making them more accessible to the listener.