Broadjam Artist: Bill Beach
Song: The Transit Line
Reviewer: Michael Cregan
Positive Comments: Very interesting, inventive intro. Good pace that keeps everything moving along very well. I like the concept and the feel is very good.
Constructive Comments: Voice is a little buried in the mix. Like to hear it stand out a bit more. The verses are running into the chorus with no break, so it is having a more monotenous feel that it really ought to. Here also, there are no dynamics. Meaning, the song stays at the same level of instrumentation, pace and volume all the way through. It could use a bit more build. Hold back on a few instruments initially, then bring them in. Toss in a change of pace for a moment.