Broadjam Artist: Michael Cregan
Song: The Story
Reviewer: Carol Ann Jones
Positive Comments: Beautiful singer/songwriter composition. I love story songs. This song has a ton of potential. I think the vocal match for the story is perfect. The guitar playing is very good.
Constructive Comments: The story moves along a little too slow to keep the listener engaged. I would speed up the tempo, and that would reflect the pounding of the waves against the ship too. The current guitar playing is more like raindrops then crashing waves.Adding a band would strengthen the story too, but I do like this delivery.