Broadjam Artist: Nick Berry
Song: She Won’t Need Me
Reviewer: Michael Cregan
Positive Comments: Strong piano opening. Good voice and very good vocal sound. I like the lyrics–very easy to grab onto the concept and meaning of the song. Easy to relate to and put yourself in the singer’s shoes. I like the hook.
Constructive Comments: Not a ton to suggest. The main thing is that the chorus needs to be set off a bit more musically. Part of this may be the dynamics and build. The piano maybe too strong during the verse so that it blends and bleeds into the chorus–too much of a good thing or too much of the same thing. Either way, does not allow the chorus to stand out. I’d do the strong intro, then back way off on the piano on the verse and come back strong on the chorus.