Broadjam Artist: Ronald Arduini
Song: PET SONG
Reviewer: Chip Salerno
Positive Comments: This is really charming in a naive sort of way. I think with a little bit of reworking, this could be a really effective piece of children’s music. I like the simplicity of the arrangement, lyrics and tune. There’s also a really nice lo-fi vibe about this.
Constructive Comments: It has a bit of a “demo” quality to it. It almost feels like it was being worked out on the spot. There’s a sort of lo-fi aesthetic about it that I really like and would hate to see it lose through too much re-working. I think the vocals should maybe be re-done. They seem a bit tentative and maybe too far forward in the mix.