Broadjam Artist: John Masarone
Song: One Day Off
Reviewer: Emma VanDyk
Positive Comments: The vocals are really good, this sounds like something that I would listen to in the car on an easy listening radio station. The instrumentation is also very well done, it’s original and it isn’t just a four chord song which I always appreciate. The end is my favourite with the “aaahs”, the harmonies blend together very nicely.
Constructive Comments: The song unfortunately didn’t flow together as nicely as it could have, I would suggest a different sound for the electric guitar, maybe something with a bit less distortion. The lyrics could use some more time spent on them as well, some of the words sounded like they would rhyme just for rhyming sake. Try to find new words to use.