Broadjam Artist: Jeff Roberts
Song: Out of the Gaze of the Evil Eye
Reviewer: John Masarone
Positive Comments: The vocal kind of reminds me of the Steve Miller Band. Sometimes it sound like Steve singing. The arrangement is nice and I like the answering harmonies at 13 sec. Really good pre-chorus at 0:36 sec. This song has a lot of potential. I especially like the short intro.
Constructive Comments: I think the pre-chorus at 0:36 sec would sound best right before the chorus at 1:10 sec. Then the guitar hook after the chorus before the new verse. Currently the chorus seems to come in when you don’t expect it, after a guitar break. I guess it is all a matter of taste but I think of building the structure so there is a payoff and the listener knows it’s coming. Overall I think the mix needs a little more balancing. The vocal sounds a little too out front. Mix has a mid-range sound which could be OK for going for the classic rock sound of the 70’s but I think you can still get that but adding a little edge with some EQ. I listened in my studio. Hope this helps.