Away From Me by Joseph Cirello

Broadjam Artist: Joseph CirelloSong: Away From MeReviewer: John MasaronePositive Comments: Very good job with this! I like the instrumentation. Great stereo spread as I’m constantly reviewing songs recommending more spread and hard panning. No probl…

Joseph Cirello

Broadjam Artist: Joseph Cirello
Song: Away From Me

Reviewer: John Masarone

Positive Comments: Very good job with this! I like the instrumentation. Great stereo spread as I’m constantly reviewing songs recommending more spread and hard panning. No problem here. Good vocal performance. Really nice chorus. Hey, I listened three times! Great ending too.

Constructive Comments: Like I said, I listened 3 times. The first pass I didn’t like the beginning. Now I sort of do. However, I would go a little longer and do a fast fade. No dead space. It is too cool to be over so fast. You don’t have to worry about a too long intro because this intro is interesting and locks you in. I listened in my studio. I felt the vocal a little too out front in some of the quieter parts. Maybe just my taste.