Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: One & Only Lonely One
Reviewer: Michael Cregan
Positive Comments: Lot to like about this tune. Catchy, easy to grasp on first listen. Vocal good (with exception noted below). Well produced demo. There is good potential in this song, one of the few I’ve given a 5 for market potential. See below. I think with some change this could get a good hearing.
Constructive Comments: “right to cry” segment of vocal a bit off. The bridge didn’t seem to add to the tune. I like the verse and chorus much better. Since this music segment appears 3 times, it may not be a bridge, but sounds much like a bridge (going over to contrasting minor chords, etc.). If it is the chorus, not sure it lifts the song or gives the punch needed.