Broadjam Artist: Jeff Maguire
Song: Light Shine
Reviewer: The Bitter Elegance
Positive Comments: The Byrds/Dylan influence on this is super cool, and in a weird way, kind of hip in 2017. I can completely hear this being used in an ultra cool TV Ad (like iPhone, green energy, or a hybrid car. It also helps that the more classic song structure allows you to have a catchy song without an overt verse/chorus structure.
Constructive Comments: I have no idea what the hook is, as the vocal on this song tends to be in one range, throughout. While I think this could be improved, I think the song already had market potential as listed above. The vocals are a bit loose (I don’t know if I would call them pitchy), but I tend to prefer pitch-perfect vocals on everything I listen to, so my judgement is a little clouded.This was a fun listen, nice job!