Broadjam Artist: Joseph Cirello
Song: Monday’s Calling (country)
Reviewer: Drew Hale
Positive Comments: Great hook, and great harmonies. Reminds me a lot of Crosby, Stills, Nash with a more updated sound. Can I please THANK YOU for taking the time to write lyrics about more than hooking up at a bar like so many other modern country songs. This is very relevant to many people I think, the waning of the love flame, the fear of loneliness, but the acceptance of the reality that love may be gone. I’d love to hear more from you.
Constructive Comments: I don’t know that I have many critiques for this tune…maybe a couple of small things. I don’t really feel like I get the “Cigarette Break” line. The rest of the song feels like the subject is ready to move on. “Cigarette Break” feels like you just want a quick reprieve. I feel like it contradicts the rest of the song a bit. Especially since you said you were “ready to run”. Otherwise, love this song. Really enjoyed it.