I Can Always Count On You by Rachel Joy

Broadjam Artist: Rachel JoySong: I Can Always Count On YouReviewer: Simon FinnPositive Comments: 1. Nice writing in an unusual time-signature 2. Loved the first chords of the chorus. 3. Nice use of light and shade.Constructive Comments: 1. Shorted th…

Rachel Joy

Broadjam Artist: Rachel Joy
Song: I Can Always Count On You

Reviewer: Simon Finn

Positive Comments: 1. Nice writing in an unusual time-signature 2. Loved the first chords of the chorus. 3. Nice use of light and shade.

Constructive Comments: 1. Shorted the introduction. Means you get to your hooks faster..you should be there within the first minute. 2. Apply some vocal tuning and reverb to sit the vocal in the mix 3. Trim the second verse – or introduce a bridge – you have four repetitions of the same long phrase. 4. There are some strange melody and harmony combinations in the end of the each chorus which could be improved.