Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: I owe You everything
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: Heartfelt song of gratitude to the Lord. The songwriter owes Him everything is the very sincere message of this song. The best verse, in my opinion, is the one with the ocean waves. Can they wash his sins away? Then the next original thought is the reference to baptism, which really worked well for the song. Randal Dunkle loves the Lord, and it comes through in every song he writes!
Constructive Comments: In the beginning of the song the instrumentation is so high in the mix that I couldn’t make out the lyrics. First lyric I was able to discern was “Take my breath away.” So I’d recommend adjusting the mix so the lyric isn’t muddied up in the mix. Work on clarity and pitch in your vocals. Or hire a demo singer.