Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Golgotha
Reviewer: J Edna Mae Thomas
Positive Comments: Like the intro and the vocal effect in the beginning. I like the hook on the electric guitar – good job. I think this song has great potential. The lyrics are great – the chorus has a great hook.
Constructive Comments: I might be inclined to shift from the vocal effect in the beginning to a clearer vocal for the contrast – it could lift the song into a new dimension thereby creating interest. I might also be inclined to develop the track by giving the impression of increased pace by throwing in some semiquavers on the bass guitar.