Broadjam Artist: N.Jones, Music Designer (Protilius Productions)
Song: Under the Hollow (Starburst Music, Trilogy Ost, 2011)
Reviewer: Mike Cantwell – TalentEast Productions
Positive Comments: With a few fixes,it should be ready for TV or Film. It goes through many changes, which I like.
Constructive Comments: Hey, one of my songs starts exactly the same way. Low deep sound. At 0:03 and 0:13 blips sound more like mistakes, flaws in the recording. I think you should take them all out. At 1:13 when the female vocal comes in, however created, there’s higher-pitched noise created. At 1:37, it briefly stops, I think it’s too void there. I thought that was the end for a split second. Maybe prior to that point, create a background and continue it through that brief pause and thereafter and fade it away, the background, that is. So, there’s continuity carrying through.