Broadjam Artist: DENNIS MAKEPEACE
Song: i want to wish you the happiest christmas
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: The guitar introduction is so absolutely beautiful. I wondered if it was going to be an instrumental. The vocal is nicely done. The lyrics are written from an interesting angle. The peaceful beginning that Jesus had…and the trouble that was to come.
Constructive Comments: White boys and fools? Not sure I understood that lyric? I think that as fantastic as the instrumentation is…the lyrics need work. “I want to wish you a happy Christmas” just seemed like a jump from where you were going with the story of Jesus.