Broadjam Artist: Bill Dake
Song: Time Traveling
Reviewer: Dave Haddad (CenterPeace)
Positive Comments: Nice intro. Nice arrangement and introduction of sounds especially in the intro. I enjoyed the piano track, very nice chords. Good song structure. Tasty bass work, the instrumental parts of this song are nice.
Constructive Comments: Guitar sounds a little out of tune in the intro. Delay effect on the vocal is a little distracting, it’s nice just the song is so empty instrumentally that it sticks out… I would have liked a little reverb, short decay 1.2 to 1.8 and no delay. Can hear some lip noise around 2:15, if possible clean up those little sounds, gives your package a more polished sound. Drum track was a little loose and didn’t lay a nice bed for the song to lay in. A more consistent 1/8 note hihat or shaker pattern would help solidify the groove. Song reminded me of an old song called “Time Passages” I think by Al Stewart.