Broadjam Artist: Signal 30
Song: Hard Rock Night
Reviewer: Black Valentine
Positive Comments: Good Sound and Vibe.Like the Groove. Like the sound of the Vocals.
Constructive Comments: I think you need to dig a little deeper Lyrically. The Words in a Song need to connect with the listener. They need to resonate. These unfortunately are really trite. Lyrics like Rock, Rock, Rock all Night, Dream, Dream Dream All Day have kinda been done to death (although I kinda like it at the end of the Song). But you gotta admit “Dance, Dance, Dance jump outta your Pants” is kinda goofy. A Song like this might have flown in 1987 but ever since Nirvana came out they made Lyrics like this look silly. Even RATT who had the hokeyest Lyrics ever wouldn’t do anything like this.I think you have Skills. You just need to put a little more thought into your Songs. It doesn’t have to be Bohemian Rhapsody, but you’ve got to be a lot more genuine and a lot less typical.