Broadjam Artist: Dave Haddad (CenterPeace)
Song: The Creator
Reviewer: CyclopsCow
Positive Comments: The combination of mixed instruments throughout, introduced one by one, and then a new instrument again and again definitely gives the song a freshness. It has an uplifting quality to it.Good job on the arrangement, even though I gave that a 3, I do think there are many great themes going on in this song. Actually, I am disappointed that the song was only 4 minutes long. I would have liked to hear more of it continuing and building.
Constructive Comments: The song takes about a minute to actually get to a building beat, but then drops off to perhaps a bridge that then loses that previously built energy. Going on the sense of freshness that I mentioned in the positive comments, yes, there is a freshness, but the repetition keeps my pretty flat on any energy change in the song, even with dynamics. I would say with the sections with no driving percussion and then to the sections with the driving percussion, provide some dynamic contrasts to make it more provocative.