Broadjam Artist: Chet Nichols
Song: Million Dollar Sandbox
Reviewer: Keith Taylor
Positive Comments: Good song. This has a lot of potential.
Constructive Comments: In the first verse I didn’t like the Line “I asked your mother cause it was such a fine day”. It seems like you were trying to make a rhyme but it doesn’t make sense. It would make more sense to say “to see what she would say”. I hear so many songs and I am guilty of it sometimes myself where the lyrics are forced and I have been told by a very good publisher/producer that a bad line can sink a whole song. This song is too good to let that happen.