Broadjam Artist: Dave Haddad (CenterPeace)
Song: Jagged Edge
Reviewer: Monday Funeral
Positive Comments: Excellent opening. Great sampling, love the chunky rhythmic guitar. Totally works to create something both heavy and light – which is very interesting. I appreciate the dynamic shifts very much, and that you’re not overdoing it. So many writers try to do WAY to much in an arrangement like this – and you haven’t. I have to think you’ve had some interest on this for some type of commercial use? If you haven’t – you will. At the 2:20 ish mark – totally works. That synth sound, wouldn’t think it would work. Followed up by the shredding guitar. You’re a pro. Keep it up. Be affirmed – you’re doing great things. Best I’ve heard in 10 reviews.
Constructive Comments: Sorry to “be that guy” but not much here. I can tell you’ve put a lot of time into your craft, it totally shows. I guess, if I’m thinking of anything to say – in listening to it a second time, possibly adding some etheral, sustained string”like” or sort of airy sustained higher frequencies at say 1:20, to help round out the texture before kicking it in again. Sort of a linkin park play? I could hear a melodic synth is what I’m saying – something simple and NOT too much. But take this lightly – my biggest constructive comment is to just keep it up. Keep going. Keep making music.