Broadjam Artist: SRJ
Song: Taken In
Reviewer: Cyniman
Positive Comments: The bass line is great like the groove, and the chosen sound cuts through the mix very well. The instrumentation works very well together helping to solidify the groove. The song evokes dreamy atmosphere that would work well as a track in a flim etc
Constructive Comments: The song structure be stronger, I had difficulty working out the hook and verse, until the end of the song, maybe adding a change in the instrumentation and extra BVs would emphasize the hook. Also adding a bit more harmonic change is the progressions of the music would help delineate the sections. Also maybe tuning the drum sounds to the key of the song would help it all fit together sonically a bit more. Also some of the drum sounds (e.g) the snare sound a bit dated, but thats just a matter of taste, nothing wrong per se with the snare sound, it still works in the trackAlso not to take anything away from the vocalist, but maybe the track is better suited as an instrumental.