Supernova by Jeff Ashbaker

Broadjam Artist: Jeff AshbakerSong: SupernovaReviewer: Warren HeinPositive Comments: like the production and instrumentation ALLOT, nice guitar work, which i would UP in the mix a bit. vocal is effective enough but attempts to be too “polished”, i’d li…

Jeff Ashbaker

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: Supernova

Reviewer: Warren Hein

Positive Comments: like the production and instrumentation ALLOT, nice guitar work, which i would UP in the mix a bit. vocal is effective enough but attempts to be too “polished”, i’d like it a bit rougher honestly.

Constructive Comments: not too hip with the cliche’ lyrics IMO in the first verse, and the lead vocal is trying too hard in my opinion with the end phrasing vibrato, i know/think you can do better than that, you’re in tune, etc, just too much “affect” in my opinion. other than that a cool retro sounding track that is well written. all the best.