{"id":86361,"date":"2022-04-17T17:34:00","date_gmt":"2022-04-17T22:34:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/?guid=0d09988db3728d1930390f1f2ec7459b"},"modified":"2022-04-17T17:34:00","modified_gmt":"2022-04-17T22:34:00","slug":"reach-the-sky-by-jim-aitken","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/2022\/04\/17\/reach-the-sky-by-jim-aitken\/","title":{"rendered":"Reach The Sky by Jim Aitken"},"content":{"rendered":"

\"Jim<\/p>\n

Broadjam Artist: <\/b>Jim Aitken<\/a>
Song: <\/b>Reach The Sky<\/a><\/p>\n

Reviewer: <\/b>dolylamby’s posse<\/a><\/p>\n

Positive Comments: <\/b>I like the song and it’s theme. Your picture you’ve painted is clear and precise. <\/p>\n

Constructive Comments: <\/b>I would look at some of your wording in your in the chorus. (‘Where’ is used to start both lines 6 & 8. You may want to say something like, “And golden eagles fly” and possibly dropping the word ‘the’ in the last line…”Where beautiful mountains reach the sky”. This would give you a bit more time and it wouldn’t seem rushed.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

Broadjam Artist: Jim AitkenSong: Reach The SkyReviewer: dolylamby’s possePositive Comments: I like the song and it’s theme. Your picture you’ve painted is clear and precise. Constructive Comments: I would look at some of your wording in your in the c…<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-86361","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/86361","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=86361"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/86361\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":86362,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/86361\/revisions\/86362"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=86361"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=86361"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=86361"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}