Peter Boynton<\/a><\/p>\nPositive Comments: <\/b>-I liked this song from the start. Thanks for sharing it!-Solid arrangement and players. Pro studio? Sounds it.-I listened 3X to catch as much as possible as I wanted to be clear with any thoughts I have. 3Xs, my friend. That’s a rave right there!-Nice vocal quality and delivery. Yours or a studio?<\/p>\n
Constructive Comments: <\/b>-Great to include the lyrics! Very helpful. Maybe put them in a standard verse-prechorus-chorus-bridge form to help get a sense of your song structure a bit faster.-You vary the melodic line\/range from the verse to the pre-chorus very nicely, but the chorus melody doesn’t lift with an expanded range. Combine that sameness in melody with the repetition of the hook, and I felt the chorus stalled a bit instead of having increased contrast and tension. Maybe take that chorus vocal line up, and let it offer a ‘cry’ factor to the vocalist’s inflection? That might give more of an emotional impact and let that chorus\/hook really stand out.-To my previous point, you add melodic\/lyric variation and syncopation that sets the 2nd verse off from the first. Very nice! get that into the chorus and a really good song could notch up to ‘great’.-Not sure your intention: SYNC placement? artist pitch? singer-songwriter artist (you)? It’s a bit long either way. The instrumental bridge is very well done and you might consider going into a 3rd pre-chorus right after it to condense your vs3 and pr-ch3 thoughts and then head right back into the chorus.-Very nice work! I enjoyed listening to this and thinking about it.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
Broadjam Artist: DENNIS MAKEPEACESong: why has love got to be so sadReviewer: Peter BoyntonPositive Comments: -I liked this song from the start. Thanks for sharing it!-Solid arrangement and players. Pro studio? Sounds it.-I listened 3X to catch as much…<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-84872","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/84872","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=84872"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/84872\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":84873,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/84872\/revisions\/84873"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=84872"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=84872"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=84872"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}
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