Diane RIDAEUS<\/a><\/p>\nPositive Comments: <\/b>There’s some great parts and some not so great -:00 – 23 nice clean opening, the brass could use a bit of toning down (EQ)but nice fat chords.:27 – 47 – the rhythm is off and distracting from those nice strings in the bass:55 that transition doesn’t flow – try simplifying itGoes along nicely till 1:02, beautiful horn part there. Some transitions between sections, i.e. 1:11 are rough but you can smooth these outTo 1:41 – starts out nice then the feel gets lost in some chord changes that are a little distractingAtt 1:43 -2:21 this is the strongest part of the composition, KEEP IT! Develop it. Another rough transition at 1:21, then to 2:35 this part might be good on its own but it doesn’t fit with what came before very well. From 2:35 to 3:35 is VERY GOOD – could be a cue track on its own.4:20 and on (repeats earlier sections) so all above applies. I really like these specified parts, suggest separate them out for several different cues. Oh – watch the distortion at 4:05 – 4:17<\/p>\n
Constructive Comments: <\/b>A lot of good stuff, just needs to be separated out into distinct cues as they don’t necessarily flow one to the next. Transitions are rough in a few spots and watch the distortion at 4:05 – 4:17Mostly just sounds incomplete. The track is very long, but there are many shorter cues (more usable for tv\/film spots) Keep going, there’s some nice developments and potential! <\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
Broadjam Artist: jim FinanSong: The Space ForceReviewer: Diane RIDAEUSPositive Comments: There’s some great parts and some not so great -:00 – 23 nice clean opening, the brass could use a bit of toning down (EQ)but nice fat chords.:27 – 47 – the rhyth…<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-84241","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/84241","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=84241"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/84241\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":84242,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/84241\/revisions\/84242"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=84241"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=84241"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/broadjamreviews.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=84241"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}
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